die typo kannst du weglassen
ansonsten find ich den bg nicht wirklich passend, den effekt rechts ist ganz schick.
evtl das ganze etwas weniger hell leuchten lassen und next mal auf die render lichtquelle achten oder das ändern.
und das gelbe ding stört mich irgendwie, von der story her und weil mir der effekt nicht gefällt^^
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