HaliHalo ^-^
Ich soll zu morgen ein Englischreferat vorbereiten.
Bin eben damit fertig geworden.
Meine Eltern sind auf der Arbeit und kann sie deshalb nicht fragen.
Wollte euch deshalb mal fragen, wie ihr es findet und was ihr evt. verbessern würdet :'O
Lg
Knoppers
Ps.: Bin in der 8.Klasse ._.
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Introduction:
The topic of my presentation is Timothy Z. Mosley, better known by his stage name Timbaland.
I have chosen this topic because I think that Timbaland is one of the biggest artists at this time
and he is making in my opinion very good music.
Personal:
Timothy is an U.S. Hip-Hop and R&B singer and producer.
He was born on the 10’Th March, 1971 in Norfolk-Virginia, where he lived for the first years of his life. Timbaland has a daughter and is engaged with his girlfriend Monique Idlett since last year. He pays very much attention to his food and so he does a lot of fitness and bodybuilding. Timothy has an own music label …
Life:
In his early life he was a disc jockey known as DJ Timmy Tim or DJ Tiny Tim. At the time he met the rapper Magoo by a schoolmate. Since this time they were inseparable. They had written, produced and heard music together. With nineteen years, Tim got the chance to visit a music studio, by a producer of 2Pac, called De Vante Swing. The boss integrated him into his producer-team. With his new friends Magoo, Ginuwine, Missy Elliot and Playa he organized the crew Da Bassment. At this moment for Timbaland began a new era. But when they hadn't so much result how they had imagined, the crew breaked up in the end of the year 2001. And so Timbaland cared for his own label Mosley Music Group.
In this time he had successful production of songs in collaboration with Steve Garrett and Missy Elliot, who he already knows from childhood times, including Nelly Furtado, Justin Timberlake, Snoop Dog and Aaliyah.
On 3 April 2007 he published his own album Shock Value. It was a great success.
It got the state Platin.
Timbaland said, that the album “Shock Value 2” would come out soon …
Your last Dream:
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Knoppers: 19.05.2008 14:26.
RE: Englischreferat (Timbaland) -> Wie findet ihr es?
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and he is making in my opinion very good music.
...in my opinion he make very good music
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and producer.
..and a producer
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He pays very much attention to his food and so he does a lot of fitness and bodybuilding.
er zahlt viel aufmerksamkeit auf sein essen und trinken und so macht er viel fitness und bodybuilding ??? was willst du damit sagen.
sonst ein ganz nettes referat...wobei ich deine einteilung in personal und life nicht gut finde...
das erste könntest du real life nennen...das 2te music career
und den satz hier
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Timothy has an own music label …
in den 2ten abschnitt verlegen...
ist es nicht ein wenig zu kurz ?? O.o
und wie wäre es wenn du seine Wichtigsten albem aufzählst ??
oder das er einen co-producer hat der DANJAHANDZ(auch danja genannt) heist
.dann könntest du noch die artist von seinen label sagen Artists bei Mosley Music Group
Nelly Furtado ( Nelly Furtado )
Timbaland ( Timothy Z. Mosley )
Keri Hilson ( Keri Lynn Hilson )
sein Bruder Garland „Sebastian“ Mosley
das wären ein paar von dort die ich so aus den kopf kenn...-
also wenn du das alles machst wirds ein ganz gutes referat...
viel glück
Zitat:
"er zahlt viel aufmerksamkeit auf sein essen und trinken und so macht er viel fitness und bodybuilding ??? was willst du damit sagen."
pay attention -> achtgeben
So hab ich das gemeint x.x
Ich kann es ja noch umändern ...
Kurz? Ja schon aber es soll kurz sein .!^^
Dann, die Artists habe ich bereits auf einer OHP-Folie aufgelistet.
Dort könnte ich dann evt. die Alben auch drauf setzten ...
Jo ...
Your last Dream:
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Knoppers: 19.05.2008 15:03.
RE: Englischreferat (Timbaland) -> Wie findet ihr es?
ich verbesser auch mal n paar sachen, so wie ich denke wie sie besser wären
in rot is das von mir geänderte dann
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Original von Knoppers
quote:
Introduction:
The topic of my presentation is Timothy Z. Mosley, better known by his stage name Timbaland.
I have chosen this topic because I think that Timbaland is one of the biggest artists in the world (find ich besser)
and personally I think that he makes good music.
Personal:
Timothy is an U.S. Hip-Hop and R&B singer and producer.
He was born on the 10th of March, in1971 in Norfolk-Virginia, where he has (bin mir nich 100%ig sicher, aber ich denke schon, wegen "for....") lived for the first years of his life. Timbaland has a daughter and is engaged with his girlfriend Monique Idlett since last year. He pays very much attention to his food and so he does a lot of fitness and bodybuilding. Timothy has an own music label called Mosley Music Group…
Life:
In his early life he was a disc jockey known as DJ Timmy Tim or DJ Tiny Tim. At that time he met the rapper Magoo by a schoolmate. Since then they have been (falls sie es immernoch sind, in der gegenwart) inseparable. They have (weil sie es ja sehr wahrscheinlich heute auch noch tun
) written and produced (das "heard" würde ich weglassen, passt nich so ganz rein, außerdem heißt es to listen to music
) together. With nineteen years, Tim got the chance to visit a music studio, by a producer of 2Pac, called De Vante Swing. The boss integrated him into his producer-team. With his new friends Magoo, Ginuwine, Missy Elliot and Playa he organized the crew "Da Bassment". At that time a new era began for Timbaland. But they weren't as succesful as they had imagined, so the crew broke up at the end of the year 2001. And so Timbaland founded ( = gründen; passt glaub ich besser..) his own label "Mosley Music Group". At that time he had successful production of songs in collaboration with Steve Garrett and Missy Elliot, who he had already knownfrom childhood times, including Nelly Furtado, Justin Timberlake, Snoop Dogg and Aaliyah.
On 3rd of April in 2007, he published his own album Shock Value. It was a great success and it went platin
Timbaland said that the album “Shock Value 2” would come out soon …
"has (bin mir nich 100%ig sicher, aber ich denke schon, wegen "for....")" <-- jop, ist korrekt.
10th of March, in <-- das ist nicht korrekt. Man spricht es zwar, aber geschrieben wird es nicht.
Der Rest gefällt mir gut
thanks chef
naja ich weiß nich genau ob man das nich auch so schreibt, aber so oder so, bei nem referat würd ich alles so aufschreiben wie ich es auch vorlese, weil ich denke die gefahr dass du es dann falsch sagst wenn da nur "10th march" steht, is höher als wenn es da richtig steht und du es dann auch so sagst
Introduction:
The topic of my presentation is Timothy Z. Mosley, better known as Timbaland.
I have chosen this topic because I think that Timbaland is one of the greatest (sonst sagst du...einer der dicksten oder größten in bezug auf Körpergröße) artists in the world (find ich besser)
and personally I think that he makes good music.
Personal:
Timothy is an U.S. Hip-Hop and R&B singer and producer.
He was born at the 10th of March, in1971 in Norfolk-Virginia, where he has (bin mir nich 100%ig sicher, aber ich denke schon, wegen "for....") lived for the first years of his life. Timbaland has a daughter and has been (wegen since!!) engaged with his girlfriend Monique Idlett since last year. He pays very much attention to his food and so he does a lot of fitness and bodybuilding. (???? er schenkt dem essen viel beachtung und deshalb betreibt er viel sport`? --- besser is, er schenkt seinem körper viel beachtung und macht deshalb...) Timothy has an own music label called Mosley Music Group…
Life:
In his early life he was a disc jockey known as DJ Timmy Tim or DJ Tiny Tim. At that time he met the rapper Magoo by a schoolmate (Was soll das heißen? "bei einem Schulfreund" oder "durch einen Schulfreund"? In beiden Fällen muss ne andere Formaulieren hin). Since then they have been (falls sie es immernoch sind, in der gegenwart) inseparable. They have (weil sie es ja sehr wahrscheinlich heute auch noch tun Wink ) written and produced (das "heard" würde ich weglassen, passt nich so ganz rein, außerdem heißt es to listen to music Wink ) together. When he was nineteen years old (Die alte Formulierung geht so gar net), Tim got the chance to visit a music studio, by a producer of 2Pac, called De Vante Swing. The boss integrated him into his producer-team. With his new friends Magoo, Ginuwine, Missy Elliot and Playa he organized the crew "Da Bassment". At that time a new era began for Timbaland. But they weren't as succesful as they had imagined, so the crew broke up at the end of the year 2001. And so Timbaland founded ( = gründen; passt glaub ich besser..) his own label "Mosley Music Group".
At that time he had successful production of songs in collaboration with Steve Garrett and Missy Elliot, who he had already known from childhood times, including Nelly Furtado, Justin Timberlake, Snoop Dogg and Aaliyah.
On 3rd of April in 2007, he published his own album Shock Value. It was a great success and he got for that platin.
Timbaland said that the album “Shock Value 2” would come out soon …
Hab mal das Korrigierte von nyce genommen...sind echt nur die sachen, die mir sofort auffielen.
"he was born at" ??? ich bin mir ziemlich sicher dass man "on" sagt..
und "he got for that platin" is auch nich viel besser als die vorige formulierung
ich meine im kopf zu haben dass die engländer und amerikaner sagen zb "and the single went platin" ..
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